Plot: Jassi is a Indian girl who wants to finally move out of her parents home. She is successful and well educated and can take care of herself, but her mom only wants her to leave if she is married to another man. The story is going to into how Jassi is going to tell her parents that she’s ready to be on her own whether they like it or not.
Plot:
Beginning-setting drive home from work. Calls twin brother to share news but feels guilty, shitty
Michael is on his way home from work. Today he was offered a new promotion to be the Vice President of a division at Hammer International a Global Investment Corp. based out of Sydney, Australia. He has one month to accept the offer and additional month to close out business in his current title and transition to the new position in Sydney, Australia. Driving in his car home he is thinking about his twin brother Terrence. Terrence was given a year or less to live 4 months ago. Terrence recently moved into hospice within the last month. He is having an internal conversation which sometimes becomes a verbal conversation with himself out loud.
Middle: setting Michael & Tamara’s home
Michael reaches home. He tells his fiance Tamara who is happy for him but she also understands the enormous weight that this decision will for everyone involved.
End:setting hospice with twin, Tamara and Raheem
Timeline of my Story:
Beginning (Chapters 1-5) – Story begins in the present moment (Prologue) narrated by the main character and goes backwards in the form of a flashback to explain how the main character got there. There will be alternating between summaries and scenes and the scenes will include character introductions through dialogue as well as setting descriptions of the In-between. Main scenes:
Middle (Chapters 6-10) – The chapters begin alternating in points of view between Rhea and “the soul boy” once this new character is introduced. (tentative) The conflict develops and there are more scenes than summaries.
Main scenes:
End (Chapters 11-15) – Conflict reaches its peak and Rhea is forced to make a final decision about whether she would like to remain on Earth and live out the rest of her life or move on to the In-Between and subsequently the “after life” to be with the “soul boy”.
This Plot Summary is going to be very vague because I have not started my story yet, as I am having a writer’s block. I also missed class on the day you discussed this and just found out in class today that this was due (I looked back at your email and saw that I overlooked this part).
Here is a very vague outline of what I think will be my story: If you gave us a specific structure, I am sorry that I missed it.
The protagonist, Margaret wants to abandon her past because she hates where she comes from. Meanwhile, she tries to better herself by becoming more educated in order to fit in with her husband Roberto’s peers as well as her new upper middle class community.
Margaret is increasingly frustrated that she is hitting roadblocks with her education completion and realizes that she will never quite be who she wants to be. She feels lonely because she distanced herself from everyone in her past yet she does not quite click with her new “friends”
Margaret hits a low point when she goes to a gala honoring Roberto’s Neurology Department. She sees that Roberto shines and is so well liked by his peers. She also notices that the women that he spends most of his time with are actually really the woman Margaret wants to be but will never be.
The next day, Margaret learns that an old friend from her old neighborhood in Philadelphia has died. As she contemplated going to the funeral, she finds herself thinking of her old crush that was more like an obsession all through high school. She also feels the need to surround herself with old friends.
Margaret attends the funeral and is welcomed by old friends. There is a bit of a distance between them, but there is a strong bond through nostalgia. Margaret’s main mission is to hunt down her old crush Mark at the funeral.
Margaret hunts down Mark and does her best to get close to him and tries her best to seduce him (which is not difficult to do). A large group of friends go out to the local neighborhood bar after the funeral. Margaret has plenty of drinks and stays glued to Mark, who is also married but his wife is at home caring for her mother with Alzheimer’s disease. Mark tells Margaret to finish their conversation as the bar is closing at his brother’s apartment (which was empty because he was working a night shift as a cop).
Margaret and Mark end up hooking up and sleeping together. Right away, Margaret compares Mark’s body to her husband’s body and is disappointed and disgusted. Mark is very aggressive and cold in bed and it takes him what seems like forever to finish. Margaret leaves right away and spends the night at her parent’s house before she heads back home to Westchester, NY in the morning.
Margaret is self loathing and anxious the whole ride home along the NJ Turnpike. When she arrives home, she sees Roberto, her family, her home, her life in a very different light…
*** I am still working on the ending!!!
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