• Timeline

    Beginning:

    Eves parents die. She is trying her best to cope with the loss. the entire school knows about it because her parents were generous donors and even have Lynn Lane named after them. Eve is now all alone in the world with no siblings to share her loss. She tries her best to keep busy by focusing on school completely. Jack comes and distracts her for a bit by befriending her. He is careless with his words and it causes their friendship to end. Jack refuses to let her go.

    Middle:

    Jack continues to pine for Eve. At the same time, he is trying to become a better man in the hopes that one day he will be with her. He is undertaking pressure from his family because they want to be something he is not. He likes his teaching job but wants to be more than that. His obsession with eve inspires and distracts him. He follows her around trying to find out what he could do to make her fall for him. Nothing works. Eve moves away.

    End:

    Jack never stops loving Eve. it is years later and he is married with kids. But he always pictures her face instead of his wife. He fails to achieve anything he wanted to out of his life. one day he sees her crossing the street. He runs up to her to say hello and catch up. he feels like his life can begin again

  • Outlined

    Dialogue with a friend

    Sees him in the parking lot

    Goes to see him but he is busy

    Meets him in the cafe

    Tells him she is happy for him.

     

  • Imagery

    Her voice is soft and cloud-like – sweet and warm tones – capable of switching quickly and effortlessly into the range she desires. Her pop singer tone memorizes the walls around her, echoing positive feedback into her ears. If it wasn’t for your terrible stage freight, you would have been sharing my favorite tunes with the world by now, she thought to herself. Disappointed with her weakness of public speaking, she plumped herself onto her bed letting go of the tightness of breath that was stuck within her diaphragm. She sat up looking at her glossy reflection in the body mirror that sat right across from her, staring back at her. You need to push past this fear; fear isn’t even real – you need to push past this illusion girl. All your life, you’ve been hiding behind your job status and position, along with the falsified respect people give you. Her reflection gave her an idea – why don’t you call up a few of your friends and have them be your judge! She immediately jumped off her bed and went through her contact list. Scrolling, she came across a few of her old time friends – Dina, Trevor and Fazya.

  • Plot

    1. Larissa follows Madison and knocks her out. She takes her to the forest.
    2. Larissa kidnaps Madison because she knows that Madison and Henry are engaged. Madison wakes up and is confused about why she kidnapped her.
    3. Flashback to when Larissa first met Henry. Henry was oddly similar to her ex that had died. She immediately started stalking him, found out where he lived.
    4. Back to the current time when Madison realizes why she was kidnapped.
    5. Flashback: Larissa continues stalking Henry in person and on social media as well. She would wait by his apartment often and follow him to work. One time she finds out that Henry actually has a fiancee.
    6. Back to the current time: Larrisa decides to drown Madison. Madison begs to be freed.
    7. Flashback: Larrisa saw them on a date. They seemed like a very sweet couple, and that angered Larissa even more.
    8. Back to the current time: Larissa drowns Madison.
    9. A week after Madison died, Larissa sees that there was an apartment for rent in Henry’s building. She decides to move in.
    10. Larissa is determined to talk to him and wants Henry to love her back.
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